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05/23/2010

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@peevishpenman

What you have is great flow in the writing, but I'm thinking about Matt and not able to answer why I should feel anything about him. He's a drinking womanizer, maybe? With a little something minor to make him sympathetic like being an attentive dog owner or some positive characteristic, I could be interested in him and not like him at the same time! He reminds me of so many people I know and they have to have something about them to make them tolerable.

Liz Borino

Thank you so much for your comment! What find to be sympathetic about Matt is the fact that he cares so much about his brother. http://writewords.typepad.com/write-words/2010/05/bad-news.html That post shows it very well I think

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